After getting a constructive feedback from Dr T and reading some parts of Ohler’s book, in addition to browsing Ohler’s website I came to a realisation on what I ought to do next after writing my storyline: modify some of its parts.
Ohler wrote:
“The story understanding process always begins with a story core…which contains three basic elements:
1. The central challenge that creates the story’s tension and forward momentum
2. Character transformation that facilitates the response to the challenge
3. The response to the challenge that resolves the tension and leads to story closure” (jasonOhler.com)
This is how my DST entitled, “Life in Diaspora” (LiD) is restructured now.
LiD narrates my journey that began after I left my homeland to reside overseas. At the same time, it looks into the driving forces and how they negotiate with my struggle to rationalise my ‘destiny’. In pensive mood all throughout, my DST will combine a reflective essay accompanied by music that, I hope, will set the viewers in a contemplative mood.
With an aim to reach a wider audience, LiD will also indirectly show the disquieting plight of overseas Filipino workers who painfully resolve to work away from their loved ones with the hope of attaining better life for their family. Since the country’s economy is constantly struggling, money is difficult to earn in the Philippines. No wonder about 10% of over 90 million total population of Filipinos are overseas. It is huge by global standard.
To facilitate the meaning- making affordances of multimodality, I plan to use a combination of abstract, symbolic and real images to let deliver my mixed message of pain, excitement and hope as we make the most of our life in diaspora. Brooding and introspective in tone all throughout, I intend to project an “open diary”- like DST. To attain this, I will probably use a font which looks like a handwriting.
I am having difficulty finding relevant images to my DST especially that I have been moving from one place to another since 2001. I thought my pictures in other countries would be useful but my brother sought for them in vain. However through my sister’s and friend’s help, I have some real images of my family, my home and friends. I gathered some images that depict some problems my country face. Some symbolic images that I found relevant to my DST are an aeroplane to suggest the act of leaving my home country; 2 masks in one image which may connote two personas; and an eye with a tear to mean sadness and parting. I have found this stage of the project comparatively more challenging than creating a storyline.
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Hi Eula,
ReplyDeleteI think we have some similar feelings living in a foreign country. Friends in the home country will say:"Hi it's awesome to live overseas and I admire you so much." Actually, there are still difficulties that we cannot tell them, because they will never understand.
There is one thing in your plan which I like very much is your mentioning of the Filipno workers, who left families and friends, with the hope to make some money and give back to them in the Phillipines. But how much money can they really make and save? How hard do they need to struggle if they are doing some basic work in a foerign country. It's really hard to everyone. I used to go to Ministry of Manpower in Tanjong Pagar Complex, where foreign workers go to issue their Work Permit cards. There are large number of workers from China, the Phillipines and India. Some of the Filipino girls are so young and I guess they are home-helpers here in Singapore. They look at the other people in a timid look, which made me feel bad every time. If you want to hear the real feeling of them and get some true images, you can go there, talking to them and taking some photos if it is allowed. I guess they will inspire you a lot.
Good choice and have fun on it.
Yes Ohler's book is really great for figuring out the story core! good move to tap on that :)
ReplyDeleteYour story is developing and it sounds intriguing!!! Argh!!! reading about your stories make me wanna see them so much... crapz!!! :p
I tried to frame my story into the ohler framework, it did not happen cos I could not get around to it and then I found another book titled story circle, it has this chapter on educational storytelling so I framed my around that, it was that book that inspired me to change the order of information presented :)
Hi Daisy,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments. I am glad to have someone who fully understands my plight. You’re right. It is quite a challenge to save given the meagre compensation majority of Filipinos receive.
Your suggestion is awesome! I will consider going there if my schedule permits. ((:
Actually, before I wrote my storyline, I spoke to a number of Filipinos about their status and life here. As a result, my ending was initially a tone of indifference to my fate. However I thought I should be more optimistic. Eventually I conformed to Dr Ohler’s story map.
Hi Xernieve,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments. I would love to show you my storyline later…Don’t worry. I still remember Dr Ohler’s description of other plots of DS in his book. He devoted a section describing non-traditional ways of presenting a story. Your style, I reckon, is like one of them.
Hi Eulalia,
ReplyDeleteI believe you could play around with several semiotic modes to create an impact on your viewers. Just a suggestion,how about inserting a Tagalog song which remixes into a Singlish song to show the migration?Most important, think about your scripted lines before the images.
-su
Hi Su,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your suggestions. I truly appreciate them. I'll take them on board. You're right. I'm too focused on the images. I should pay more attention to the meanings of my storylines.
Hi Eulalia!
ReplyDeleteThe DST that you presented was indeed very touching and really brings us to your personal struggles as well.
I do hope that you are feeling much better now and that the 'difficulties' at work has been ironed out.
I've always enjoyed 'devouring' your blog entries as they are highly informative and intellectually refreshing :)
All the best for your course!